Poem writing.

by Akash in General Discussions

Akash

47 1.03k 10.4k

14 years ago

Here you should write a small poem.

First i am starting

My poem is:
Bura jo dekhan mai chala bura na milya koi
jo mann khoja apnaa, toh mujse bura na koi

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Sridevi

86 979 7.83k

14 years ago

#64023

A nice thread.
Hope it can be in English also:

Mine, which i did some time back..

"Oh! Mighty peacock, you are truly a beauty
With bright blue and green hues, you are the personification of royalty.

Your wonderful dance brings us rain
And your gorgeous feathers are harbingers of prosperity and gain.."

Rajani K

145 7.14k 58.4k

14 years ago

#64036

Akash is the poem done by some hindi poet or you.

Sridevi it proved that you are not only a good writer and GD expert but also a good poetess.

sajeetharan

341 4.1k 40.5k

14 years ago

#64041

English Mom sridevi rocks,

that was really a sweet and cute poem, good effort sridevi, Keep it up

Sridevi

86 979 7.83k

14 years ago

#64056

Oh thanks sajeetharan and rajani

Santosh Kumar Singh

872 7.54k 86.3k

14 years ago

#64070

Jab mai tha tab Hari nahi , Jab Hari hai Mai nahi
Sab Andhiyara Mit gaya , Jab Deepak Dekhya mahi...........

Santosh Kumar Singh

http://experienceofknowledge.blogspot.com/

yogesh gupta

1 10 112

14 years ago

#64073

SHREE SANT KABIR DAS will live long..........hats off to that great soul.

sajeetharan

341 4.1k 40.5k

14 years ago

#64074

Angels and demons high above,
What do thou have in your stove.

Are you making something good for me?
Or as usual, cooking up some more trouble for me.

Thou art of doing good is somewhat strange,
Cause I am certainly out of thou art’s range.

I don’t complain but others do,
They keep hoping that you will cook their stew.

Millions of people lie idle everyday,
And hope thou will turn things their way.

Does everybody need only thou’s luck to succeed?
What are we trying to do, plant a tree without a seed?

Either way I don’t give a damn,
Man’s destiny is in his own hands.

Akash

47 1.03k 10.4k

14 years ago

#64220

IT's nice friend. Keep it up and right as many as small poems you can.

sajeetharan

341 4.1k 40.5k

14 years ago

#64310

Another beautiful night, the moon so high
it's still the two of us, just you and i
your hair so smooth, your eyes so fine
a chill runs down my spine

I still remember the fear, the beating of my heart
the way we met, never imagining to be torn apart
i had dreamt of us, never missing a beat
this relationship however is incomplete

The way we met and the way we grew
the perfect rainbow on grass with dew
all those efforts seemed to be in vain
for i fell from the stars to never return again

Akash

47 1.03k 10.4k

14 years ago

#64441

My next Poem is:
Like the stars in a moonlit night,
You shine in my life no matter how dim you are,
You send a wish for me to be happy always,
And make me feel special no matter what.
I love you my dear friend!!!!!!!
And this is my wish that the love keeps growing in all the years to come!!!!!!!!

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