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My first poem on boddunan.
in General Discussions 13 years ago
Aman Sinha
Aman Sinha
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13 years ago
I am writing my first poem here. I had written it about 5 years ago when I was in class Seven. Please do rate it and give some advice. Actually, I could not save the whole copy of the poem, while I was arranging my books, I re-found it between them.

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    Aman Sinha
    Aman Sinha
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    63 505 14.4k
    13 years ago
    I have written the poem in Hindi, but it is not showing. What should I do?
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    Kalyani Nandurkar
    Kalyani Nandurkar
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    13 years ago
    Oh? I first thought it was in some code language!! :laugh: :laugh:

    Treat it as an image file (convert to .jpg) and attach as picture, that way we can view it!

    "I am free of all prejudice. I hate everyone equally."
    - W. C. Fields :)

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    neetu jain
    neetu jain
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    13 years ago
    yes kalyani is right...her suggestions will help you out....do it faster,so we can read your very first poem.....
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    sumit
    sumit
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    13 years ago
    A poem is an arrangement of words containing meaning and musicality. Most poems take the form of a series of lines separated into groups
    THANKS! THIS REALLY HELPED A LOT! Share with World now

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    Bharat
    Bharat
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    13 years ago
    Dear Friend,

    I am not able to read that poem.

    Regard's
    Bharat.
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    kavita porwal
    kavita porwal
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    13 years ago
    Hi aman,

    I am eager to read your first poem, so arrange it faster....
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